Black Rain, new fiction of Quorl Dalon.
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Black Rain, new fiction of Quorl Dalon.
Friends.
I have the taste of announcing a new work, which one adds now to the library of the squadron Epsilon. Black Rain, of our pilot, Quorl Dalon. I invite all you to check his work in our web http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Epsilon.htm Please go to menu The Art of GE, submenu Fictions. Or this is the direct link http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Black_Rain.htm
From already, I am grateful to Quorl Dalon for your contribution to the Arts in the GE.
Equally, it is very pleasant to me to announce the chapter one of the work Broken Chain, that our MSG Matthew Mitchell will publish in our web. This chapter also they will find it in the Submenu Fictions, or, this is the direct Link: http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/broken_chain.htm
Thank you Matthew Mitchell for his contribution. We will be in expectation of the remaining chapters.
Thanks to all.
I have the taste of announcing a new work, which one adds now to the library of the squadron Epsilon. Black Rain, of our pilot, Quorl Dalon. I invite all you to check his work in our web http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Epsilon.htm Please go to menu The Art of GE, submenu Fictions. Or this is the direct link http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Black_Rain.htm
From already, I am grateful to Quorl Dalon for your contribution to the Arts in the GE.
Equally, it is very pleasant to me to announce the chapter one of the work Broken Chain, that our MSG Matthew Mitchell will publish in our web. This chapter also they will find it in the Submenu Fictions, or, this is the direct Link: http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/broken_chain.htm
Thank you Matthew Mitchell for his contribution. We will be in expectation of the remaining chapters.
Thanks to all.
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Black Rain, Chapter two
My friends. I have the taste of announcing the second chapter of the novel Black Rain, of our pilot, Quorl Dalon. As the same one it will announce already, this novel is available in the Imperial Archives or in the following direction:
http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Black_Rain.htm
Thank you for his attention.
LT Branet
http://branet0.tripod.com/Epsilon/Black_Rain.htm
Thank you for his attention.
LT Branet
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If I may point out two small details: First of all, Fel is a Rear Admiral, not a Colonel. Secondly, Captain Calder is a Captain of the Line (CL), not a Lieutenant Commander (LC). The abbreviations are confusing, I know, but both of those points should be fixed, is possible.
Other that, it's shaping up to be an interesting work.
Other that, it's shaping up to be an interesting work.
~Lieutenant Commander La Forge
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La Forge: Maybe it takes place in the future when, for some odd reason, Fel becomes a Colonel and Calder is demoted to Lt. Commander...? :P
Another possible explanation, at least for the "Fel problem", could be that he is not even talking about *the* Fel, but some other Fel. I mean, we have more than enough Fels hanging around, don't we? :P
Another possible explanation, at least for the "Fel problem", could be that he is not even talking about *the* Fel, but some other Fel. I mean, we have more than enough Fels hanging around, don't we? :P
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Thanks for the attempted save syrt. No, I freely, but grudgingly, admit that I wrote this book with no check to see the ranks of the people I was writing about. I will change those parts when, or if, thanks to my dumb old computer, I write chapter III.
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Syrt: Yeah, I think we have two, but, last I checked, one of a Rear Admiral, and one was a (Legion) Captain or something. 
Dalon: Don't worry about it - just two small details. Your work as a whole is turning out to be a very interesting read.
Dalon: Don't worry about it - just two small details. Your work as a whole is turning out to be a very interesting read.
~Lieutenant Commander La Forge
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Believe in this, and we will win!"

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